Their Feedback: The elements that work are:
Parachuting men go with the lyrics "it's oh so quiet" as it is calm and peaceful. I love the fact of the pinata being used and things flowing in the air from the pinata. Love the fact that the visuals go with the music.
Things that need developing are:
Nothing I can think of at the moment.
Things that don't work are: (remember to include reasons)
The milk bottles, I don't really understand what the reason for using them is and how they relate with everything else.
They gave us three stars- "Well on the way to Box Office success".
Their Feedback: The elements that work are:
The fireworks.
The heart full of confetti.
Things that need developing are:
Intertextual references? - Does it really fit with genre of song?
Things that don't work are: (remember to include reasons)
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They gave us two stars: "It definitely had potential".
Their Feedback: The elements that work are:
-Well structured animatic showing detailed plan of music video.
-Intertextual referencing.
Things that need developing are:
-Target audience.
Things that don't work are: (remember to include reasons)
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They gave us two stars: "It definitely had potential".
Their Feedback: The elements that work are:-The idea of the music video concept- very unique and targets a wider audience then 18-35, younger people too.
Parachuting men go with the lyrics "it's oh so quiet" as it is calm and peaceful. I love the fact of the pinata being used and things flowing in the air from the pinata. Love the fact that the visuals go with the music.Things that need developing are:
Nothing I can think of at the moment.
Things that don't work are: (remember to include reasons)
The milk bottles, I don't really understand what the reason for using them is and how they relate with everything else.
They gave us three stars- "Well on the way to Box Office success".
Their Feedback: The elements that work are:
The fireworks.
The heart full of confetti.
Things that need developing are:
Intertextual references? - Does it really fit with genre of song?
Things that don't work are: (remember to include reasons)
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They gave us two stars: "It definitely had potential".
Their Feedback: The elements that work are:-Well structured animatic showing detailed plan of music video.
-Intertextual referencing.
Things that need developing are:
-Target audience.
Things that don't work are: (remember to include reasons)
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They gave us two stars: "It definitely had potential".
Their Feedback: The elements that work are:
Things that need developing are:
-Target audience, make the age lower.
Things that don't work are: (remember to include reasons)
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They gave us three stars- "Well on the way to Box Office success".
Their Feedback: The elements that work are:-Ideology of the group + tying this to their image.
-Intertextual reference.
-Application of Goodwin.
-Logo.
-Concept.
Things that need developing are:-Target audience demographic- should be B-D/C
Things that don't work are: (remember to include reasons)
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They gave us three stars- "Well on the way to Box Office success".
Excellent blogging Charlotte, you are obviously progressing with the project well. Ensure your writing is grammatically perfect at all times an try to add more reflective depth to your journal comments - for example rather than merely commenting that you're happy with something, try to evaluate exactly what it is that works/what you did that ensured the successful result.
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